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Post by NATIVESPONGECAKE on Jun 26, 2006 0:54:34 GMT -5
Alright, this was originally about my book FE (that is all i shall say because of idea-thieves out there) but then it flopped over to one of my other most recent stories... I am not sure what it is about any longer. Those who have read FE will probably see why it was "originally" meant for it. here goes... How could you care for such a time, and suddenly not? Why have you left me to uncaringly rot?
I constantly cry, an ocean for you, my friend. For I thought our bond would never come to an end.
For me you cared, cried, and loved. And now all you do, is ignore, push, and shove.
You want me out of your life it seems, to never return. Our friendship’s fire has turned to embers, and will not ever again burn.
I loved you, my friend, you were my best. And now without you, I think of laying eternally down to rest.
A knife in my hand, a gun in the other one. Will my life and misery ever be done?
There is only one way, I’m afraid, to make it right. I must end it all now, right here, tonight.
Is it really as pointless as I think to say good-bye? I hold the knife solely now and can’t help but cry.
For now I shall be gone, and you won’t have to worry. I am eager to end the sadness, our pain, and my life in a hurry.
No last second thoughts, no words of remorse. Here, I shall lie for you forever as only a corpse…
It just goes to show Friendship is something you can’t break or bend. They will suffer, fight, and bleed for you even to the bitter end… [/i]
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spiralnotebook
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I figured out avatars just not signitures. help?
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Post by spiralnotebook on Jul 5, 2006 11:05:13 GMT -5
that is really good really deep really kinda depressing I love it it shows alot of emotion and shows alot of the hurt and pain the person is going through *not that that is a good thing but still*
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revengefreak
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Black bunnies. Satan's most evil minion...
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Post by revengefreak on Jul 9, 2006 13:05:13 GMT -5
i kno the part of the story it was meant 4! yay i'm a smart 1!
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Post by NATIVESPONGECAKE on Jul 9, 2006 23:28:29 GMT -5
yay!! good job kelly. yeah... and no, not that all that stuff in the poem mentioned is good... but, its okay. we kinda likes its anwayz. oh, and just for the record, i would explain about how its related to my stories, but like i said *whispers* "idea thieves..."
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