ETERNITY

[NATIVESPONGECAKE]

This is probably going into a new story i am writing, so yeah... here it is:
And I'm sorry if I annoy everyone with my repetitive rhyming poems. Some think it nice, but I find it repulsive and curse at times, so just let me know.

ETERNITY


I wanted to be there for you forever, until time withered away.
I wanted to make you smile on the rainiest day.

I would’ve guided you when you were completely lost and confused.
I would’ve cried when you did and laughed while amused.

I wanna always be by your side and be yours forever.
Stay in your arms and forget you, never.

You were the best thing that ever happened to me.
Your face was the best thing my eyes would ever see.

But I still wanna be there for you until time does wither away.
And I still wanna see you smile on the cloudiest day.

I’m sure you once cared for me well and perhaps you still do.
But I know I’ll love you for eternity, this I promise you.

[NATIVESPONGECAKE]

so.
f'n.
cheesey.

but there it is anyway.

[x9xlinzx9x]

aww you gotta be cheesey once and a while!! if you werent how would we feed the mice!

anyway on a more serious note, i like it. so there! i guess that makes me cheesey too. but thats ok! i like cheese.

[spiralnotebook]

well, lets see hear cheesy is good . good point on the mice... I like it and that does say alot because I do think that rhyming poems are sometimes overrated but hey, if your good your good. and your good so there. (plz dont take any of that as against you in any way I love your stuff)

[revengefreak]

i LUV it too. it's awesome i am otherwise speechless about the peom.

[NATIVESPONGECAKE]

okay, corrine. it takes let's see, we'll just say, A LOT to really offend me. It all just flies right by me nowadays. And exspecially with you, because you're just you and kewl... thank you all for the friendly comments!